I think you're being slightly harsh on yourself. I think technically in terms of production skills, the quality of the picture and the lens flare, its an A grade. The writing is good in terms of content, but perhaps the font could be slightly more interesting and "say something" (signify something) about the product.. eg it could be a technology style font etc.. The website might look better as well if it didnt have the http:// part at the beginning. if you make these changes, it could go to an A grade as at the moment i would give it an B+
I think you're being slightly harsh on yourself. I think technically in terms of production skills, the quality of the picture and the lens flare, its an A grade. The writing is good in terms of content, but perhaps the font could be slightly more interesting and "say something" (signify something) about the product.. eg it could be a technology style font etc.. The website might look better as well if it didnt have the http:// part at the beginning. if you make these changes, it could go to an A grade as at the moment i would give it an B+
ReplyDeletePRODUCTION = B+